I must say I quite like this collection. My favourite out of the all of them would have to be number 2.

For the first outfit, I think the lines flow very well. The collar and the back of the dress both turn upwards, making your eyes follow and see the full dress. The panes of fabric floating down add a sense of elegance and pull your notice. But there is one on the dress itself, I'm not sure if you understand me, the short one that is cut off, that doesn't seem right. Extending it all the way down like the others might have been better.
I particularly like the spiderweb pattern near her bust. However, I would like to have seen a tiny splash of grey near her feet to pull the outfit together. Perhaps a curving stripe on her shoes that matches the lines of the dress? Love the hairstyle. It fits perfectly with the refined flair.

And the second one. I honestly adore this one. The red hourglass helps to create this visual illusion of a tiny, cinched in waist. I think the length of the dress fits, it was a good choice. Her shoes aren't indicated, I presume this was intentional. I think it was a good decision since it places the focus where it should be, on the main part of the outfit.

Number 3! My only quarrel with this one is her stomach area. The fabric billowing out is pretty unflattering. I do enjoy the strips of fabric on her back, it's feminine and has a classy feel to it. I don't really think the style and coloring of the shoes fits the dress, but as standalone pieces, they're gorgeous.

Next. I think the 'legs' on this is a good concept, and I can see that happening on a real runway. I'm not a big fan of both the grey gauzy fabrics, on the other hand. I think the dress would have made more of a statement without them. The fabric train near the bottom doesn't quite fit with the dress and the top feels a little forced in to me. The gloves are a nice touch to it, as is the wispy belt that seems like a thread of spider silk to me.

Last one. I quite enjoy this one as well. The curves and lines of the fabric are intriguing, especially the bottom area. The near absence of red in this one makes sure the contrast between the black and the grey seen easily. I feel the bottom line of the dress is too short, however. A slightly lengthened one would probably have made it a little less abrupt. But then again, that's my personal preference speaking. The floaty fabric is a nice feature. And the tiny little hourglass motif on her wrist? Perfect.

Speaking about the collection as a whole, I would have relished a design with a spiderweb as the focal point. Overall, my compliments on a beautiful collection.

I don't want to sound stalker-ish or anything but I've looked at a lot of your work and the progression I've seen is amazing. this picture is one that stuck out the most to me so i thought i would critique it. (from left to right) On the first one the strands of flowing fabric gives off that spider web feeling, it's a nice touch, i'm not too sure i like the skirt being up like that in the back. second one i love the shape of it, it portrays the symbol of black widows in a subtle way. third one is just amazing how it flows. the fourth one is a little over the top, kinda costumey. the last one is my favorite it like the web and the spider together. I also love the choice of hair color it accents the pieces perfectly.